Make a simple product look a million dollars!

**ryanmargolin** · 03:56 PM

yeah i see what you are saying. I think the main thing he is looking for is to make sure people can look at the bottle and know it is a professional hair labs product. the logo and the name and the slogan are important in creating that. where you have the often imitated. never duplicated part that would probably need to be under the company name and logo. Is there any other fonts that you might be able to use on the company name? Something that give it a bit more of a modern look? Also could you make the logo bigger than the company name? Maybe it might be an idea to make the company name and logo with slogan bigger then the product name?

I like where we are going with his I just have to get it situated well enough to present to the boss man again. thanks for your patience

**orionoreo** · 11-06-2009, 04:34 PM

no problem

here's two tries

**ryanmargolin** · 11-06-2009, 04:53 PM

I like the the first one. Could you put the New Demension down a little bit above where it says Head Bond? And where it says often duplicted.never imitated could you push that over a couple of spaces so it isnt sitting exactly in line with the professional hair labs?

**orionoreo** · 11-06-2009, 04:57 PM

like so?

**ryanmargolin** · 11-06-2009, 05:12 PM

that looks good ok can you replace some of the text now?

- The product name is spelled New Demension. Could you put one more space between New and Demension and put a small tm sign beside the product name?
- Where it says Hard Bond, can you change that to Soft Bond Adhesive.
- Where it says Can Used on Poly and Scalp, can you change that to " Can Be Used on Poly and Scalp.
- Can you change the 5oz to 7.4 oz

On the back of the label can you change the following also :

- Can you take out " For Professional Use Only"
- Can you make "DO NOT apply directly to monofilament or lace foundations" bolder and take out that white block in the background of it.
- Can you put in the Ingredients "Co-Polymer Dispersion, Methyl Paraben, Demineralized H20, and Propyl Paraben in the same format that you have put it on the front of the label with the circle points between them?

-Can you change the address to:

Manufactured by PHL Inc.
4775 Allen Road
Zephyrhills, Florida
33541

Toll-Free: 1.800.778.4247
International : +1.813.788.7468
Fax : +1.813.788.7983
E-Mail : info@prohairlabs.com

Hopefully after this I can take it back to be looked at. Thanks a mil. appreciate it!

**orionoreo** · 11-06-2009, 09:10 PM

sorry for the delay, was away from my desk

**chrishirst** · 11-07-2009, 06:52 AM

Could I just point out that the (mis-)spelling of the product in the first post is

New Demension and not Dimension (which of course is the correct way)

**serandfae** · 11-07-2009, 01:15 PM

Note to contest holder: At this point, if you are working with orionoreo in the level of detail that you are, you need to declare him the winner and work with him one on one, then post here when the transaction is completed.

tim

**ryanmargolin** · 11-07-2009, 02:13 PM

i know the correct spelling is dimension but thats not the way the product is spelled. there is a reason for it being spelled demension, thanks for the observation though.

**tehmonday** · 11-07-2009, 03:47 PM

I'll give it a try if you haven't worked out something with orionoreo. Let me know

**chrishirst** · 11-07-2009, 04:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ryanmargolin

i know the correct spelling is dimension but thats not the way the product is spelled. there is a reason for it being spelled demension, thanks for the observation though.

I realise that the product is spelt with an "e", I was merely curious as to why YOU had not pointed it out to the participants.

**ryanmargolin** · 11-07-2009, 10:14 PM

im still open to ideas tehmonday. if you have something to contribute please post

**hakimcallier** · 11-18-2009, 11:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by afcbob

how is this.

i like it! :d

**serandfae** · 11-18-2009, 12:26 PM

One week past the close date. We need an update or this contest will be considered abandoned.

tim

**hakimcallier** · 11-18-2009, 02:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by serandfae

One week past the close date. We need an update or this contest will be considered abandoned.

tim

Hi Tim, I'm new does this happen often? The abandonment thing I mean.

**orionoreo** · 11-18-2009, 09:57 PM

he said he's taken the thing to his boss last week but I haven't heard back from him either... so... I don't know

**serandfae** · Yesterday, 01:27 AM

CH was contacted, with no response, so this contest has been considered abandoned and is now closed.

tim