BanHomework.ORG Banner Needed

**andrei155** · 04-08-2008, 03:52 PM

Nice work Kim!

**Tixylix** · 05:45 PM

Ninjax; I definitely like the green better, but now I think the font is a bit too dark, maybe more white? I also think if you give the general banner a bit more noise it won't look so empty.

Kerrick; I like the second one much better, it seems more interested to look at, but I think you need to make some changes to the blackboard; a different font for the motto and moving it directly underneath, instead of the wood border, maybe a brushed metal?

Agrias; Excellent! That is a fantastic idea with the dotted line across and the heart with the scissors, it makes the banner so much less empty, involving the whole banner! There's not much more that I would change, perhaps the flowers, maybe a different shape? But I'm not sure.

Gx3Grafix; Great job with the banner, it gives the perfect effect with the character standing there with the spray painted font. It just seems to me like the banner is a bit empty, what you have now is great, but I'm not sure what you would add, perhaps you can think of something? I liked the diagonal stripes in the last one, maybe something like that or just some brush noise.

Update: I am thinking of giving a second prize if anyone is willing to accept $10 USD, just say, it is going to be so hard to choose just one, great entries so far!

**Agrias** · 04-08-2008, 06:37 PM

I will fix the flowers tommorow morning, check back soon

**Abbas22** · 04-08-2008, 08:45 PM

Thanks for the feedback - Here is another try with your comment in mind =)

**Kerrick** · 04-08-2008, 10:05 PM

I've implemented your requested changes. Thank you again for your feedback!

**Sensei.Design** · 07:06 AM

here is my version, only used the colors of your design and tried to create a header that fits to the rest of teh page. hope it worked

**Gx3 Grafix** · 04-09-2008, 08:05 AM

**Tixylix** · 04-09-2008, 08:07 AM

Abbas22; The two pictures are still from the clipart collection and I still think the main text needs to be bigger and more centered.

Kerrick; Yes, much better - the only thing I can suggest is for the font to be bigger and for the motto to go under the main title.

Sensei.Design; I'm sorry to say but there's nothing that I really like in your design, the colours are good and if you want to give it another go, stick with those. Try and do something a little closer to the other designs in the thread.

**Tixylix** · 04-09-2008, 08:09 AM

Gx3Grafix; This design is looking great, there's no much more I can really say at all, unless you have any more ideas yourself, I can't see any need for anything to be changed. Great work.

**Gx3 Grafix** · 04-09-2008, 08:18 AM

Thank you, best of luck with your contest.

Quote:

Originally Posted by andrei155

Nice work Kim!

Thank you Andrei for your comment

Forgot to mention that.

**Agrias** · 04-09-2008, 09:03 AM

any better?

**Kerrick** · 04-09-2008, 09:17 AM

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Originally Posted by Tixylix

Kerrick; Yes, much better - the only thing I can suggest is for the font to be bigger and for the motto to go under the main title.

For the bigger font, do you mean the Title, the Motto, or both? And, I'll center the motto under the board, too.

**Tixylix** · 04-09-2008, 05:15 PM

Agrias; I'm not sure which one I like better, they're both fantastic. Unless you can think of anything else to change (which I can't) then you'll just have to sit tight! Great work.

Kerrick; Just the title.

**woosh** · 04-09-2008, 05:34 PM

Nice work peeps!

**Agrias** · 04-09-2008, 06:06 PM

Nowp, if you think this is what you expected of a banner, then I'll just wait till you end the contest. For me, there is ony hopeing on winning

**Kerrick** · 04-10-2008, 09:34 AM

There we go, largest Title text that'll fit, and centered the motto.

**Tixylix** · 04-10-2008, 05:19 PM

Kerrick; Is it possible to put the motto under the title? On the blackboard.

**Kerrick** · 04-10-2008, 10:38 PM

Sure, no problem.

**Tixylix** · 04-11-2008, 06:02 AM

Kerrick; Directly underneath. Other than that, there's not much more I can suggest! Great work.

**Agrias** · 04-11-2008, 06:09 AM

good work. 4 days to go, you're gonna wait till then? I guess all submissions are in now.