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Your site is quite impressive. I like the color blend and layout. You optimized for adsesne at 2.3% density which is okay; but ptimization was zero for H1/H2/H3 etc. You may consider optimizing for the headings and subheadings.
Your content needs rewriting. That English is not our first language is not good enough reason not to write it correctly for your visitors. You can hire Ghostwriters to write at least the content of your home page.
Bear in mind that what you say and how you say it make different impressions on your prospects. Poor speech or writing puts off the reader or listener very quickly. You visitors should read and appreciate your message without poor language distraction.
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