Request to review a couple of my web pages

**cristian** · 06-04-2009, 10:00 PM

Hi to all,

I'm wondering if someone can take a look at a couple of pages of a website I'm working on and offer up any tips, advice, suggestions or whatever else you may care to share. My website is about helping all those gazillions of people who want to learn how to make money on ebay. Unlike most other sites about ebay, mine concentrates on the stuff in the world around us. Please take a look at:

http://auctionbandits.com/gallery/si...tmas-tree.html

and

http://auctionbandits.com/gallery/cr...et-pistol.html

Please ignore the home page and the rest of the site at this time. I know it's a mess, and it will soon be completely redone.

I currently have all 300 of the gallery entries finished and ready to go, they're just not online yet. I'd like to get some feedback on a couple of my pages so that I don't have to go back and correct all 300 of them.

Since nearly every one of the different pages on my site concerns a completely different topic item, I'll have to optimize almost every page for completely different keywords to pull in the most relevant ads for the particular item under discussion. As of now, though, it doesn't look like things are working out as I'd planned.

The 'Crosman 600 pistol' and the 'vintage Christmas tree,' for example, are such 'long tail' topics that you'd figure getting relevant ads wouldn't be that hard. The Google keyword tool even indicates (for what that's worth) that there are ads floating around for these exact keyword strings. But all I get are the generic ads, most of which have nothing to do with what the page is about.

Any advice or anything - from ad colors - to key words - to ad placement- to seo hints - to anything at all, please don't hesitate to let me know. This is my first shot at creating an adsense site, so any help at all is really appreciated.

Cris

**zsikder** · 06-06-2009, 02:21 PM

aluminum Christmas tree is mind blowing. Hey, can you give me idea about the price of cross man 600 semi aut..............?

**zsikder** · 06-06-2009, 02:24 PM

You should not put gun link in any adsense forum which is against the Google TOS. You should keep it in your mind. Ok..

**cristian** · 06-06-2009, 08:04 PM

What's interesting to note here is that although Google bans bb guns on the Adsense end, they still take the cash from the advertisers on the Adwords end. Hmmm.... I wonder where all those advertisers - who bought the ads that appear on my Crosman page - think their ads are going to end up. On gardening websites? Or maybe websites about motorcycle repair? Interesting point there Zsikder!