Hi over there! I'm from the Netherlands so my (American)English is not the highest level. Created two websites: http://better-quicker-cheaper.com and http://better-quicker-cheaper.net
Can anyone tell me if there are grammar or spelling mistakes? Is it obvious for Americans/Canadians/British/Australians that the content was written by a non-English speaking foreigner? Did I make any other mistake? Are the sites convincing enough? Should I add or remove something? MANY THANKS!!

The English on the site looks fine to me. I didn't read through the entire site, but looking at the home page of each I'm not seeing anything obvious. If I had stumbled on either site I would assume it was written by someone who is a native American English speaker. I don't want to tell you the grammar and spelling are perfect since I only spent so much time looking, but I'm not seeing anything obvious you would need to change.

The grammer and spelling seem fine in the quick read.

All that keyword packing down at the bottom of the page may be a problem.

Nice looking sites.

Guess I didn't scroll down the page enough. Yes get rid of the keyword stuffing. It screams spam to both people and search engines.

i agree with vangogh as soon as you see the stuffing you lose interest in what the site is originally about, it "cheapens" it if you understand what i am saying

i say that this site might not make sells - need a lot more grapgics, pics and catchy and graphical advanced site. Take a look at your leading competitors.

I agree with what roy told you, the site needs to be more appealing, though I had a look at plasticsurgery.org and and don't find that much better, you just really need graphics.

Your first link is too your donation page. Which looks like to me your just trying to make some quick cash