Hi

I am trying to make up advertisements to advertise SBI. (Site build it)

I was wondering, what the average persons opinion is of the ad below ?

Or should I just advertise one website at a time (OR - Do you think that the whole of my add that is below is too much information to give a person all at once ?)

All of your suggestions/ideas would be very welcome & appreciated.


Thanks Craig


This is the add.


The ULTIMATE work at home company /web host & more

Are you looking for an all-in-one-solution to build a website that requires no html and no technical experience ?

I have tried out many companies but none worked until I discovered SBI (Site build it).

I researched it in many different ways – (BBB online, search engines, forums & and I made a few phone calls to real people) - which finally convinced me to try it as they have a 100% refundable guarantee.

Everything was above board !

If you want to experience the same or better success than I have had please take a look at these web sites

The SiteSell Homepage
The best overall introduction to Site Build It! - SiteSell's home page.
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SBI! Home Page (buildit)
The complete site about SBI! What the “it” means in Site Build It!,
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If you are looking to Work From Home
Just about everyone's dream is a job that they can do at home. No commute, no bosses, and a chance to work in your 'jamees. Well maybe not. This page emotionally connects with anyone looking for a new life and new possibilities... moms, retirees, people with health problems, and anyone looking for a job they can do from home. SBI! has the power to deliver on this dream.
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For Retirees/Pre-Retirees
Let your audience know that retirement can mean freedom, enjoyment and extra income.
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For WAHMs, "Work At Home Moms"
WAHMs choose not to take paid work outside the home, so that their family can be their first priority. Show this growing audience how SBI! provides the flexibility, income generation and personal fulfillment they are seeking.
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Thank you for your time Craig

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What medium will your ad be in?

they will be put on any place on the Internet that offers advertising - e.g. forums , classified ad websites & any others I come across.