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Old 04-18-2007, 01:27 AM A blog review! ;-)
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Could you reveiw my blog deisgn.. cause I think it's kinda crappy...

I need your suggestions

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Old 04-18-2007, 01:51 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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Well, I'll give you some credit: you got a set of stones for a 13-year-old. I don't know if I would have had the guts to jump in and try something like what you're doing so quickly. So I'm going to go a lot easier on you than I normally would have on someone say my age (30). Consider yourself lucky: I've been told I'm a complete prick.

As far as the looks of it go, I like the basic skin. Like most blogs, it's relatively simple, the logo looks cool (although I'm not sold on the font you used), the menu's a little small, and the blog portion itself is clean.

But I'm going to ask you a straight-up question that I'm pretty sure I already know the answer to: are you making money with this blog? Seriously? If you are, and you're 13, I'd be very surprised.

First of all, 13-year-olds can't even enter into an affiliate or publisher agreement since it constitutes a legally binding contract. You gotta be 18 or get a parent's permission to do this sort of thing, and most parents would never agree to something like that simply becaust most of them aren't progressive thinkers and couldn't stand the thought of their offspring potentially making more money than they are.

Second, some of your content is your own, but some of it's clearly not. And that's a game too many people have tried to play and failed miserably.

I'm also not sure about your colour idea for Adsense, just because it may pose a violation of the Adsense ToS (you're not allowed to put images beside ads and solid colors may pose a violation of that as well.)

Not only that, some of your ads are for some of the biggest scammers going (Text-Link-Ads among them). The whole "buy links for SEO reasons" is about to get flushed straight down the toilet by Google (and likely MSN/Yahoo! to follow) and then the TLA concept won't be worth anywhere near as much, if at all.

In other words, I like the idea that you're 13 and trying (I won't call it a fact, because 13 could be 45)...but you've got a way to go yet, kid.
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Old 04-18-2007, 03:01 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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thanks for that

I'm planning to change the design.. is a 2 column design better? like this blog

ok, I am earning from that blog, well couple of dollars per day on the affiliate and adsense. i have my dad's name on it. fyi, my dad's the one who taught me on this internet marketing thingy so he allows me.

About the content, what do you mean? It's all original content... are you saying it's duplicate?

the adsense I think is legal, because as you can see, mr. adsense (joel comm) is using the same technique, I got it from him

ok, so thanks adam. have a great day
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Old 04-18-2007, 03:26 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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It is a nice blog design for a 13 year old. Your design is a three layout column and you said its to crappy, you need to categorized the 2nd and 3rd column. You need to increase the font size of the text in the navigation button and the font text in your content. The content is informative but you need to discuss it more.

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Old 04-18-2007, 03:58 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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ok, thanks for the suggestion, so is a 2 column layout better? like this blog
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Old 04-18-2007, 10:04 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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I'd advice you to stay with this design. This is really better. A 2 Column esign would reduce the space available for you.
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Old 04-18-2007, 10:47 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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well, yea i think. if i switch to a 2 column theme i would get a long sidebar
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Old 04-18-2007, 11:27 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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"OK so I'm going to make money with a 13 year old... How? 13 year olds USUALLY don't know what they're saying. OMG there's way too many ads, dude I'm leaving." That's exactly what I thought. It's not bad but at the moment there's just too many ads. Make one column explaining who/what/when/where and keep the rest for ads.
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Old 04-18-2007, 08:25 PM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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I like the layout but the advertising boxes and blocks don't help at all =\ Maybe you could use a graphics program and change the colours of those boxes (especially the black one). Are you going to change the banner everytime you celebrate your birthday :P
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Old 04-20-2007, 02:21 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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ok, I changed the theme guys.. because there were so many ads...is it better now?
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Old 04-20-2007, 02:26 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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The previous one looked lots and lots better.
Switch back to it. Just reduce the number of ads. Thats it.
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Old 04-20-2007, 02:59 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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now that's a nice looking blog
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Old 04-20-2007, 09:22 AM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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now that's a nice looking blog
Agree with you !
Simple design..but it's a really Great and communicated !
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Old 04-25-2007, 10:44 PM Re: A blog review! ;-)
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glad you guys liked it thanks
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