Location: Cincinnati Ohio
Yes, the site looks alot better without the "Amy" ad. And I don't understand how I even got a popup because my browser has a popup blocker.
I understand that English is a difficult language to learn, I've been speaking it since I was 2, and I still have to go back and correct errors.
And your English is not terrible, it's just that when you're dealing with a serious subject like "making money online" you have to be taken seriously, and to do that you need perfect grammar. If you have some friends that could help you it would be worth exchanging some favors maybe.
I reviewed a website about Bollywood awhile ago, he didn't have to have perfect English because Bollywood is not a serious subject, It may have even added to the charm a little.
So good luck, and btw, is that Justhost ad your affiliate link? I was considering switching to them, and if I do so, it will be through your ad link.