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Old 07-24-2009, 02:23 PM tell me your thoughts
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Old 07-25-2009, 03:22 AM Re: tell me your thoughts
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My first thought is that you need a few slaps on the wrist for sloppiness. There's no difference in blogs and websites when it comes to making links that work, watching spelling and grammar, and generally paying attention to details.

Actually, I like the look of your site; it suits my personal taste. However, it's not very workable. White text on dark backgrounds is frowned upon because it's difficult to read. Yours is better than most, but I did have to do a 'Select All' in order to read the small menu across the top.

I'm mystified as to why you left the name of your theme in the banner and left the actual name of your blog below it as a URL in tiny text. I know I'm coming down hard on you, but since you said you'd been working with websites, it's pretty hard to excuse these basic things; I'm a newbie, and I know, so you certainly should.

Was this category, 'Tips about ever think you can think off' meant to be funny? If so, you should have made it clearer; if not, then 'Tips about every thing you can think of' is how it should read.

You have some nice content; I found something about Adsense that I was glad to learn and would have found more, I am sure, if I had had the time to read more.

I hope you accept this in the spirit in which it is meant and don't get hurt feelings. I always want to be corrected rather than being allowed to continue making the same mistakes, so I hope I haven't been mistaken in assuming that you feel the same way since you did submit your site for evaluation.

And don't forget that I said that I really like it. It's just that it breaks so many rules made by people who probably know a lot more than I do--and you, too.
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Old 07-25-2009, 04:24 AM Re: tell me your thoughts
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I Think You Will Agree With Me That Writing
Lots Of Text In All Capital Letters Like This Becomes
A Bit Of A Chore For The Reader To Digest. So You
Should Take Another Look And Try Using More Lower
Case Ok?
Also I Found The Lack Of Contrast Between The Fonts And
Background Made My Eyes Ache.
Other Than That I Think Your Site Has Potential. And
I Agree With The Other Reviewer That
You Should Leave Out The Humor If It Is
Likely To Confuse Visitors.
Best Of Luck.

Note: I wrote this all in caps but it
looks like it was autoformatted.
But i think you see my point.

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Old 07-26-2009, 10:11 AM Re: tell me your thoughts
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I'm mystified as to why you left the name of your theme in the banner and left the actual name of your blog below it as a URL in tiny text. I know I'm coming down hard on you, but since you said you'd been working with websites, it's pretty hard to excuse these basic things; I'm a newbie, and I know, so you certainly should.
WELL I LIKE THE THICK BIT MOSTLY

NO ALL GOOD POINTS
Well the web sites i do are not for content as content goes more of a service where this blog is for content only and information Yes my spelling is bad allways has i do try Very good points i shall chage some of these asap

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