please review my blog

**jyale** · 06-22-2008, 01:55 AM

Hey all I set up this blog to write on various subjects. and to help drive in revenue with google ads which isnt working out so well latly.. Anyways any comments would be appreciated http://www.jasonyale.com

**Sneakyheathen** · 06-22-2008, 06:48 PM

First Impression

"E107! I haven't seen you in a while. How's it going man?"

Design

I know E-man is an IRRITATION to theme, but you gotta try! Put some work into a header (it doesn't look like a commercial blog, but if it is, then go ahead and make a logo. And yes, there is a difference between a header and a logo) and spice up the color scheme. A little more effort into the background too. The spacing is already laid out for you.

Content

Niiiiccceeee. Good grammar, interesting style. It's got some really good and unique content, as only true personal blogs can have! (because generally, nobody's life is parallel to yours) I dunno if I like the block of floating text at the top, or the search. As well, the adsense is kind of in an awkward placement. I think between entries would be a good spot. Then maybe border that introduction?

Would I Read It?

Sure, but the text is a little small. *squints*

Overall

Nice job. Put some more effort into the colors and the background, and you'll be all set to let the intramanets know how it's going in Jason-world.

**jyale** · 06-23-2008, 11:22 PM

yah im interested in getting alogo for my site. but I suck at making graphics... know anyone you could recommend..

**Sneakyheathen** · 06-24-2008, 12:11 AM

Garala at web-talks.com is pretty good. He made me one for Diligent.

**jyale** · 06-24-2008, 10:46 PM

thanks

**arcel** · 06-25-2008, 04:41 AM

you don't have any logo?
the maybe you could put some style of your blog...
it looks too boring and because of the content... but content wise - nice! it's just not that interesting...

**jyale** · 06-27-2008, 11:59 PM

what could i do to make it more interesting..

**johnlloyd** · 06-30-2008, 08:16 AM

i think that it is quite good, adding some pics or images to every post looks more interesting, i think that changing your header images or adding some logo will help i guess, but overall you've done a great job!

**journey08** · 07-02-2008, 03:51 AM

Your content is great because of its uniqueness. Though it looks quite boring at first sight... I think it will attract more visitors to read the whole content of your every post, if you try to make your title bigger so that it will be more noticeable and clear. Try also to highlight some of the important words and add some attractive images to make your post more interesting to read...