Please review my blog

**Mooofasa** · 02-01-2008, 12:12 AM

Pseudocrap is my personal blog, on which I write posts about topics that I find interesting and humorous under the categories General, Design and Developing, Education, Humour and Vdieos.

Any and all feedback is welcomed.

Thanks,
mik

**Crankshaft** · 01:11 AM

It's a good start. I would suggest avoiding "Hello World" type posts, such as your "Updates" entry. The reason is that these things are only interesting to you. It's understood that personal blogs tend towards E/N (everything to the writer/nothing to anyone else) but try to keep it to a minimum.

The visual style is OK. It has a lot of color but minimal complex graphics, which I guess is all the rage in blogs. The colors are complimentary enough. I might shrink the header area a bit, since there is a lot of empty space that isn't used for much. Some use of "negative space" is good but don't overdo it.

Hard to say more until there are more posts. I would give it a 6-6.5 based on what I have seen today. If it fills up with things many people would find interesting, that score could easily rise.

**dknight3** · 02-01-2008, 01:56 AM

looks very nice, kinda weird that it only displays one entry on the main page though.

**The Winner** · 02-01-2008, 08:31 AM

Nice site !
But you need a cool logo !

**Mooofasa** · 10:22 AM

@Crankshaft
Removed the updates section of the post. I agree with your comment about there being too much white space, I am working on adding something that will fix that. Talkupation added.

@dknight3
I am still playing around with the idea of multiple posts on the home page. As a matter of personal preference I like there to be one post. However, I am considering adding a feature to allow you to customise how many posts you want to show on the home page. Talkupation added due to your comment inspiring a thought.

@The Winner
Thank you. I just can't seem to make a logo that fits in with the design. Hopefully I will get inspiration as my blog grows. Talkupation added so that you're not left out.

Thank you for the comments guys.

**The Winner** · 02-01-2008, 03:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mooofasa

@Crankshaft
Removed the updates section of the post. I agree with your comment about there being too much white space, I am working on adding something that will fix that. Talkupation added.

@dknight3
I am still playing around with the idea of multiple posts on the home page. As a matter of personal preference I like there to be one post. However, I am considering adding a feature to allow you to customise how many posts you want to show on the home page. Talkupation added due to your comment inspiring a thought.

@The Winner
Thank you. I just can't seem to make a logo that fits in with the design. Hopefully I will get inspiration as my blog grows. Talkupation added so that you're not left out.

Thank you for the comments guys.

I can make you a well designed logo if you want, just PM me !

**Mooofasa** · 02-01-2008, 03:24 PM

I am sure you could The Winner and thank you for the offer, but if it is all the same I would like to continue as-is and design a logo when I get that little spark of creativity.

**itscooper** · 02-01-2008, 04:13 PM

Awesome site.

The design and the content are both very good. Love the comment at the bottom.

Could use a logo but I don't think it'll improve it a great deal... just because I think the simple 'straight line' thing makes it look good without a logo.

Good luck.

**Mooofasa** · 02-02-2008, 04:28 AM

Thank you for the feedback cooper.

**ADAM Web Design** · 02-02-2008, 10:36 AM

I don't think it needs a logo, either. Where would you put it anyway? The text thing is fine.

You're off to a good start. I'd suggest making your recent posts a bit more obvious and you've got a Javascript error in IE, but other than that, I'm cool with it.

**Mooofasa** · 02-02-2008, 11:04 AM

Well I took on board all the comments made so far and made a realign of my site. As for the logo, I have played around with several and they just don't fit. Maybe on the next realign.

Any comments on this reincarnation?

**clink** · 02-04-2008, 11:41 PM

I actually really love the design. It's modern, clean and not too crowded at all. Great job!

I don't really have a lot to suggest in that respect. Content wise i would make it a little more focused and a little less random (but that's up to you). Also the footer text comes across as a little offensive, even to those of us who aren't gonna steal your code lol.

**Mooofasa** · 02-05-2008, 12:38 PM

Thanks for the feedback. I am currently updating the layout a little (new column, fills more of the screen (relative sizing).

I re-read the footer and it is indeed rude. I am sorry about that and will change it on the next realign.

As for the content, I think as I make more and more posts, it will start to fit in better. I'm a considerably random person (some may say schizophrenic) so the first few months of posts will just be me finding my style and filling the DB.

**clink** · 02-08-2008, 08:17 PM

Glad to hear that you're working on improving things. Good luck with the site!

**yesintlcorp** · 02-19-2008, 05:33 AM

Hi there,

Your concept is quite good. Nice simple design looks quite userfriendly as compared to cluttered design.

However, can I please suggest to replace the orange color with a more catching color like Maroon / Navy Blue.

Otherwise good work !!! Keep it up.