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Old 12-23-2007, 05:17 PM Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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Hello friends,

There is a new technology and IT related blog which I made at http://www.shoutingblog.com. Please do review my blog. This is my first blog and I don't have much experience yet in blogging. So your suggestions are really precious for me. There are just 4 posts there as of now. But I will now add 2-3 articles at least daily at Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog].

Thanks in advance!
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Old 12-23-2007, 07:44 PM Re: Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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I like it! did you write the content yourself? or do you get it from somewhere like digg?
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Old 12-24-2007, 05:16 AM Re: Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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I like too , calm coloures looking pretty and attracts well, make impact to read the articles, good articles, good work.......
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Old 12-25-2007, 01:49 PM Re: Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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Some are like tech news article...for tht i pick news from google or yahoo and write article myself...

For tech articles and product or rivalries...i write myself...no copying
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Old 12-25-2007, 01:56 PM Re: Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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Wow, this is creepy:

http://www.clipclip.org/clips/detail...-the-tech-blog

I found this exactly 41 seconds after Google indexed it and started showing it in SERPs. Are you responsible for this, Muhammad, or are you getting content-jacked?

I only have two major comments about the site:

1) Your header blends into your search box.

2) Your copy is rather lengthy and difficult to read. You're using WordPress, so use the <!--more--> tag on your posts to split them up. That way, people can read the first couple of paragraphs and find out if they want to read more.
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Old 12-25-2007, 03:42 PM Re: Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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I couldn't get you what you are saying! You seem to be an expert so I will be PMing you..
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Old 12-25-2007, 10:11 PM Re: Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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Hi there...I'm going to answer this publicly so that others can comment and add suggestions and/or learn from it. I did get your PM, but this works better for all concerned.

What I mean is that the white text that says "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" was overlapping your search form, except now it's gone. If you plan on adding it back, shrink the font size down to about 2/3 of what it is now.

The other thing that I was referring to was your content. You mentioned that you wrote it yourself, and given the circumstances I tend to believe it. The problem is that you have a tendency to use long paragraphs and word/phrase combinations that aren't commonly used, and that makes it rather difficult to read. The only way you're ever going to solve that problem is through reading and practice, reading and practice, reading and practice, etc.
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Old 12-26-2007, 03:36 PM Re: Review my new blog "Shouting Blog [The Tech Blog]" - http://www.shoutingblog.com
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No the search option is also below so I don't need at the top. Moreover you want to say that I should use short sentences. Thanks for this suggestion. My brother also said me once when I didn't score good in paper and when I tried to make short i scored good in the final exams...
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