Looks more like a cross to meh. Try making it so you can see some features in the face, like just some hoels for the eye's or something. And maybe between the arms and the sword you should find a way to make the arms outline more, then you would be able to tell that those are arms.
I'm not to fond of the text but if thats what you like go for it. I'm going to attach a picture with circles where i said to change in the arms.
Here is an update. Please fell free to tell me what you all see when you first look at the picture. Iwant it to be clear what the pic is but i want it to look artistic
Last edited by david7287; 06-30-2005 at 06:31 PM..
The persons body is outlined better. I asked my GF to take a look and she said all she saw was the sword and didnt know there was a person, i still think you need some kind of face definition. On your way though
