Please review my animated banner !

**FGG** · 06-02-2009, 07:31 PM

I have used photoshop for a fair bit now, allthough i think there still are lots to learn about it.

Please let me know what you think of my animated banner for the games website, its a pretty rich banner, i opted to not go for the simplistic type.

Not sure about the text at the end, driving me insane, any suggestions ?

http://img30.imageshack.us/img30/4153/fggwatermark.gif

**zeruel** · 06-06-2009, 02:25 AM

Honestly speaking, the font style is not good. Also, the flashing text doesn't look good as well.

**Digital_shubhi** · 06-07-2009, 07:28 AM

Really its not much good. You need to learn a lot to make a good banner.

- Digital -

**Giselle** · 06-07-2009, 10:47 AM

Hello Charles,

Besides what the other two members mentioned, the white blobs coming out of the shooting guns doesn't look realistic, for me it takes away from the graphic. I can see where you have put some thought into the graphic.......

**FGG** · 06-07-2009, 04:03 PM

Yeah true thanks for feedback its a bit too big and lumpy anyway, designing a much simpler logo which will fit in better also.

Was great fun to make tho!

**rypher21** · 06-10-2009, 01:08 AM

..improve the color combination..

**timoffshoring** · 06-10-2009, 11:08 PM

try making it simple. and the font style and flashing texts are not that good. i know you can make a better one. post it again and we'll give feedbacks

**jayparker90** · 06-22-2009, 09:21 AM

I will honestly say that the clarity of the image is not good at all
you need to make it more sharp and nice, the font also seems to be not good at all
please try to modify it and then you can share it with a review again

**egillsigurdur** · 06-26-2009, 03:59 AM

Sorry, man.

Normally when your new to designing you're not that great. Often helps to read tutorials on that matter, or to view a great design (can't remember any now).

If I were to see this banner I'd completely ignore it. I can hardly read it and it looks like some sort of pornography. What's with the white dude anyway?

**Denver411** · 07-14-2009, 02:05 AM

font is really hard to read, especially that quick! Whats with the low res?

**Minusone** · 07-14-2009, 06:48 PM

way too much going on without getting the point across. Remember sometimes less is more. As opposed to this maybe try some bold lettering with a symbol/logo to the right or left to represent the point of the banner flashing would be efficient.
With all due respect there is no balance in this ad you know. Try sticking with 3 -4 colors and focusing on the point than on random art.
Good luck!

**justcoolsam** · 07-15-2009, 03:30 PM

i think its good start. but you have to more learn about the Font choice. and the position of there. And make sure that for banner, especially when u create animation, that the speed of the frame. when your gun spot is moving it looks busy.

But Good Start..

Best of Luck

**chikulanikader** · 07-18-2009, 01:54 PM

My opinion is color is not ok.it is too much dark, but animations and idea of your banner very attractive.
Well done.

**AD7863** · 07-18-2009, 03:28 PM

I think the way you've made the animations are freaking great, I always mess them up in Photoshop howver the image itself is not so good. Maybe you should try changing the colours and the text?