logo for youth group.. need feedback

**andrewhochradel** · 09-10-2007, 11:50 PM

what do you think... anychanges i should make?

**vangogh** · 09-11-2007, 12:12 AM

It depends a little on who's in the youth group. What characteristics might the share other than being young.

I like the look. I can see the heart theme running through the logo with the ECG lines. The idea of the figures is a little tired, but I've generally liked it anyway.

I might add more color given it's for a youth group.

**pushtiu_c** · 05-21-2008, 07:47 PM

it looks good to me ... but as vangogh said I couldn`t say if it represents the group

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about the text ... the text from the heads ... at this resolution I see it and I can read it ... but if you make it smaller I don`t think I can read anything from it ... and I would have another suggestion ... just try to use the CC0000 red instead of the FF0000 (from my expirience, it looks better in the red/black/grey theme)...

As for the colors ... vangogh said that too ... you used only red ... that`s only one color as black and grey are not really colors ... although black and red do give the ideea of active(whatever it is) and seriosity and here I could not really give you suggestions because you`re the only one who really knows what this logo should represent ... but if you decide to use another color then you should think for some green ... it does look good with red, but it`ll change totally the ideea it represents ...

**Cheshire_cat** · 05:32 PM

I would think about just using two instead of four people, A logo should be as simple as possible. Think simple church.

**delighted** · 05-22-2008, 07:45 PM

I think simple would be better too. Also, you should consider a new font for the text. And perhaps a new placement - text on their heads just don't make much sense to me.

**timothynblake** · 05-24-2008, 04:01 AM

There's to much going on in the logo i think a simpler version would work much better. Also the font chosen does'nt look good. I can't see how this logo will relate to a youth club either.

**davemies** · 05-24-2008, 05:12 AM

i would reduce it to using the pulse and lose the people. maybe use a heart

**kenpachi** · 05-24-2008, 07:33 AM

I don't like the color combination is too simple. The design is just to complex with 2 guys and gals. Make it more simple and easy to put at any website.

**wchua24** · 05-24-2008, 11:07 AM

i looks nice but it depends on what kind of youth campaign...and the ECG line is not that visible... but i will rank it 8 /10..

**travs** · 06-15-2008, 04:34 AM

simplicity rocks

**Eclion** · 06-17-2008, 01:39 AM

Hmm.. I appreciate the fact that you put a lot of thought into this. With the name "The Pulse" and how you translated that into a picture, it looks well thought of and I commend you for that.

But like what most of them said, for a logo that is a little too complicated. That would probably work as a banner of some sort but you how to use simple shapes and colors for it to work as a logo. ^__^

**spitz** · 06-22-2008, 08:44 PM

I'm gonna agree with Cheshire Cat and say that I think it should be two people, for simplicity's sake.